[AppDB] Small wording tweaks

[Francois Gouget]

Changelog:

  * help/generic.help
    help/maintainer_ratings.help
    help/privacy.help
    help/voting.help

    Small wording tweaks.


-- 
Francois Gouget         fgouget at free.fr        http://fgouget.free.fr/
      The software said it requires Win95 or better, so I installed Linux.
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Index: help/generic.help
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RCS file: /var/cvs/appdb/help/generic.help,v
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -p -r1.6 generic.help
--- help/generic.help	10 Jan 2005 22:15:44 -0000	1.6
+++ help/generic.help	26 Jan 2005 11:48:08 -0000
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ to verify the most important aspects of 
 
 <li> In case of failure, try different builtin, native DLL settings:
 Run Wine with --debugmsg +loaddll to find out which
-DLLs are loaded as native or builtin ones.
+DLLs are loaded as native or builtin.
 Then make sure appropriate native versions are in the
 c:\windows\system directory as configured in your Wine
 config file. There are five options you can choose from when setting
Index: help/maintainer_ratings.help
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RCS file: /var/cvs/appdb/help/maintainer_ratings.help,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -p -r1.1 maintainer_ratings.help
--- help/maintainer_ratings.help	5 Jan 2005 05:24:45 -0000	1.1
+++ help/maintainer_ratings.help	26 Jan 2005 11:36:09 -0000
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 <h3>Maintainers Ratings System Help</h3>
 
 <p>
-The Application Database features a Maintainers rating system that allows us and you to see
+The Application Database features a Maintainers rating system that allows you to see
 which applications work the best in Wine. This rating system is designed to assist
-users by giving a rating based on an "experts" experience.
+users by giving a rating based on an "expert's" experience.
 </p>
 
 <ul>
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ An application can be rated as Gold if i
 <li>Silver</li>
 
 <p>
-If an application needs DLL overrides (native DLL's from a Windows instalation) to install and
-run but runs flawlessly otherwise can be rated as silver. There should be an accompanying "HowTo" 
-written to allow users to get this app to run.
+If an application needs DLL overrides (native DLL's from a Windows installation) to install and
+run but runs flawlessly otherwise, then it can be rated as silver. There should be an accompanying "HowTo" 
+written to allow users to get this application to run.
 </p>
 
 <li>Bronze</li>
Index: help/privacy.help
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RCS file: /var/cvs/appdb/help/privacy.help,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -p -r1.3 privacy.help
--- help/privacy.help	26 Mar 2004 20:36:54 -0000	1.3
+++ help/privacy.help	26 Jan 2005 11:49:53 -0000
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 <b>Cookies</b>
 <ul>
 	The Application Database uses cookies only to preserve login information in your web browser.
-	Advertisers or other companies do not have access to the AppDB's cookies. 
+	Advertisers and other companies do not have access to the AppDB's cookies. 
 </ul>
 </p>
 
Index: help/voting.help
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RCS file: /var/cvs/appdb/help/voting.help,v
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -p -r1.2 voting.help
--- help/voting.help	24 Mar 2004 15:43:10 -0000	1.2
+++ help/voting.help	26 Jan 2005 11:52:25 -0000
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ The Application Database features a voti
 you would MOST like to see running in Wine.
 </p>
 
-<p><b>Step by Step on Voting</b></p>
+<p><b>Step by Step help on Voting</b></p>
 <ol>
 
 <li>Log into the Application Database.</li><p>
@@ -32,8 +32,9 @@ you would MOST like to see running in Wi
    <li>When voting for an application, you are voting for <b>ALL</b> its various versions. There is
    a separate system in place for ranking versions.</li><p>
    
-   <li>You can clear your vote at anytime. Simply browse to any App in the database, select the app
-   in your vote list you want to clear, and click the Clear button.</li><p>
+   <li>You can clear your vote at anytime. Simply browse to any application
+   in the database, select the slot you want to clear, and click the Clear
+   button.</li><p>
 
 </ul>