[AppDB] Resend: Fix typos and grammatical errors on test result
pages
"Alexander N. Sørnes"
alex at thehandofagony.com
Fri May 26 07:30:15 CDT 2006
This patch fixes some typos reported by Rich, and a few grammatical
errors I found while fixing it.
UPDATED to include some more fixes. Rename 'testing results' to 'test results', and remove some odd capitalizations.
KGJ skrev:
>
>>
>>------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>Index: testResults.php
>>===================================================================
>>RCS file: /home/wine/appdb/testResults.php,v
>>retrieving revision 1.3
>>diff -u -p -r1.3 testResults.php
>>--- testResults.php 23 Jan 2006 02:10:31 -0000 1.3
>>+++ testResults.php 30 Apr 2006 11:48:05 -0000
>>@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
>> <?php
>> /**************************************************/
>>-/* code to submit, view and resubmit Test Results */
>>+/* Code to submit, view and resubmit Test Results */
>> /**************************************************/
>>
>> include("path.php");
>>@@ -111,10 +111,10 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
>>
>>
>> //help
>>- echo "<p>This is the Screen for imputting testing information so that others looking at the database will know \n";
>>- echo "what was working or a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
>>+ echo "<p>This is the screen for inputting testing information so that others looking at the database will know \n";
>>+ echo "what was working in a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
>> echo "<p>Please be as detailed as you can.</p>\n";
>>- echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution on the list of existing Distributions please add it add it in the \n";
>>+ echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution in the list of existing Distributions, please add it in the \n";
>> echo "field provided.</p>\n\n";
>>
>> if(!empty($errors))
>>@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def
>> {
>> // help
>> echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
>>- echo "<p>This is the list of Test Results waiting for submition, or to be deleted.</p>\n";
>>+ echo "<p>This is the list of Test Results waiting for submission, or to be deleted.</p>\n";
>> echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and\n";
>> echo "re-submit it into the AppDB .<br>\n";
>> echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
>>@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def
>> echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
>> echo "<p>This is the list of Rejected Test Results waiting for re-submition or deletion.</p>\n";
>>
>>
>>
>Shouldn't this line be also:
>
>echo "<p>This is the list of Rejected Test Results waiting for re-submission or deletion.</p>\n";
>
>or
>
>echo "<p>This is the list of rejected Test Results waiting for re-submission or deletion.</p>\n";
>
>? OK, that's not wrong with your patch but with the original file. I
>just noticed it while reading...
>
>
Thanks! I guess I should have read through the file a bit more
thoroughly . . .
Please use the new patch instead.
>
>
>> echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and re-submit it into \n";
>>- echo "the AppDB .<br>\n";
>>+ echo "the AppDB.<br>\n";
>> echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
>>
>> $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Rejected Testing Results");
>>
>>
>>
>
>
>Greetings KGJ
>
>
>
>
>
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Index: testResults.php
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/wine/appdb/testResults.php,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -p -r1.3 testResults.php
--- testResults.php 23 Jan 2006 02:10:31 -0000 1.3
+++ testResults.php 26 May 2006 12:24:28 -0000
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<?php
/**************************************************/
-/* code to submit, view and resubmit Test Results */
+/* Code to submit, view and resubmit test results */
/**************************************************/
include("path.php");
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
$oTest->iVersionId = $_REQUEST['iVersionId'];
$errors = "";
- // Submit or Resubmit the new testing results
+ // Submit or resubmit the new test results
if (($_REQUEST['sub'] == 'Submit') || ($_REQUEST['sub'] == 'Resubmit'))
{
$errors = $oTest->CheckOutputEditorInput();
- $oTest->GetOutputEditorValues(); // retrieve the values from the current $_REQUEST
+ $oTest->GetOutputEditorValues(); // Retrieve the values from the current $_REQUEST
if(empty($errors))
{
if(!$_REQUEST['iDistributionId'])
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
}
}
- // Delete testing results
+ // Delete test results
if ($_REQUEST['sub'] == 'Delete')
{
if(is_numeric($_REQUEST['iTestingId']))
@@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
redirect($_SERVER['PHP_SELF']);
}
- // is this an old test?
+ // Is this an old test?
if(is_numeric($_REQUEST['iTestingId']))
{
- // make sure the user has permission to view this testing result
+ // Make sure the user has permission to view these test results
$oVersion = new Version($oTest->iVersionId);
if(!$_SESSION['current']->hasPriv("admin") &&
!$_SESSION['current']->hasAppVersionModifyPermission($oVersion)&&
@@ -92,29 +92,29 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
switch($oTest->sQueued)
{
case "new":
- apidb_header("Submit new testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+ apidb_header("Submit new test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
$oTest->sTestedDate = date('Y-m-d H:i:s');
break;
case "true":
- apidb_header("Edit new testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+ apidb_header("Edit new test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
break;
case "rejected":
- apidb_header("Resubmit testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+ apidb_header("Resubmit test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
break;
case "False":
- apidb_header("Edit testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+ apidb_header("Edit test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
break;
default:
- apidb_header("Edit testing results for ");
+ apidb_header("Edit test results for ");
}
echo '<form name="qform" action="'.$_SERVER['PHP_SELF'].'" method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data">',"\n";
//help
- echo "<p>This is the Screen for imputting testing information so that others looking at the database will know \n";
- echo "what was working or a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p>This is the screen for inputting testing information so that others looking at the database will know \n";
+ echo "what was working in a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
echo "<p>Please be as detailed as you can.</p>\n";
- echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution on the list of existing Distributions please add it add it in the \n";
+ echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution in the list of existing distributions, please add it in the \n";
echo "field provided.</p>\n\n";
if(!empty($errors))
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
echo '<p></p>',"\n";
}
- // View Testing Details
+ // View test details
$oTest->OutputEditor($_REQUEST['sDistribution'],true);
echo '<a href="'.BASE."appview.php?versionId=".$oTest->iVersionId.'">Back to Version</a>';
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
echo '<tr valign=top><td class=color3 align=center colspan=2>',"\n";
- // Submit Buttons
+ // Submit buttons
switch($oTest->sQueued)
{
case "new":
@@ -154,56 +154,56 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
else
{
// error no sub!
- addmsg("Internal Routine Not Found!!", "red");
+ addmsg("Internal routine not found!!", "red");
redirect($_SERVER['PHP_SELF']);
}
}
-else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not defined, display the Testing results queue page
+else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not defined, display the test results queue page
{
- apidb_header("Testing Results");
+ apidb_header("Test results");
- // Get queued testing results.
+ // Get queued test results.
$oTest = new TestData();
$hResult = $oTest->getTestingQueue("true");
if(!$hResult)
{
- // no Tests in queue
- echo html_frame_start("Submitted Testing Results","90%");
- echo '<p><b>The Submitted Testng Results Queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
+ // no tests in queue
+ echo html_frame_start("Submitted test results","90%");
+ echo '<p><b>The submitted test results queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
echo html_frame_end(" ");
}
else
{
// help
echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
- echo "<p>This is the list of Test Results waiting for submition, or to be deleted.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p>This is the list of test results waiting to be approved or deleted.</p>\n";
echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and\n";
- echo "re-submit it into the AppDB .<br>\n";
+ echo "resubmit it into the AppDB.<br>\n";
echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
- $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Submitted Testing Results");
+ $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Submitted test results");
}
- // Get rejected testing results.
+ // Get rejected test results.
$hResult = $oTest->getTestingQueue("rejected");
if(!$hResult || !mysql_num_rows($hResult))
{
- //no Test Results in queue
- echo html_frame_start("Rejected Testing Results","90%");
- echo '<p><b>The Rejected Testng Results Queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
+ //no test results in queue
+ echo html_frame_start("Rejected test results","90%");
+ echo '<p><b>The rejected test results queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
echo html_frame_end(" ");
}
else
{
//help
echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
- echo "<p>This is the list of Rejected Test Results waiting for re-submition or deletion.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p>This is the list of rejected test results waiting for re-submission or deletion.</p>\n";
echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and re-submit it into \n";
- echo "the AppDB .<br>\n";
+ echo "the AppDB.<br>\n";
echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
- $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Rejected Testing Results");
+ $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Rejected test results");
}
}
apidb_footer();
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