wineusr: Minor improvements to the introduction.

[Jeff Zaroyko]

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From 6cb2938d65b17d7599b2b967eb2e3f098e8734f2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeff Zaroyko <jeffz at jeffz.name>
Date: Fri, 16 Jul 2010 13:09:58 +1000
Subject: wineusr: Minor improvements to the introduction.

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 en/wineusr-introduction.sgml |   29 +++++++++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en/wineusr-introduction.sgml b/en/wineusr-introduction.sgml
index 4b326dd..0af5fa3 100644
--- a/en/wineusr-introduction.sgml
+++ b/en/wineusr-introduction.sgml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       <sect2>
         <title>Further questions and comments</title>
         <para>
-          If, after examining this guide, the FAQ, and other relevant
+          If, after examining this guide, the <ulink url="http://wiki.winehq.org/FAQ">FAQ</ulink>, and other relevant
           documentation there is still something you cannot figure out,
           we would love to hear from you.  The <ulink
           url="http://www.winehq.org/site/forums">mailing lists</ulink>
@@ -64,20 +64,27 @@
                 linkend="getting-wine">Getting Wine</link> and see 
                 the <ulink url="http://www.winehq.org/site/download">Wine 
                 Downloads</> page. For the casual or new user the simplest 
-                is to get an rpm distribution.    
+                is to get a packaged version for your distribution.
               </para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
               <para>
-                Configure wine using the <link 
+                Optionally configure wine using the <link 
                 linkend="config-wine-main"><emphasis><filename>winecfg</></>
-                </link> command. For most people wine should now be usable.         
+                </link> command. Wine should work without any additional configuration options.
               </para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
               <para>
-                To test your installation run wine's Windows 3.1 like file 
-                manager using the <filename>wine winefile</> command.
+                To test your installation run wine's notepad clone
+                using the <filename>wine notepad</> command.
+              </para>
+            </listitem>
+            <listitem>
+              <para>
+              Check the Wine <ulink url="http://appdb.winehq.org">AppDB</ulink>
+              for specific instructions or steps required to install or run
+              your application.
               </para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
@@ -87,9 +94,10 @@
                 <filename>filespec/appname.exe</></></link> command.
               </para>
               <para>
-                The first command you will run will be to install a package. 
+                The first command you will run will be to install an application.
                 Typically something like <filename>wine 
-                /media/cdrom/setup.exe</> or the equivalent.
+                /media/cdrom/setup.exe</> or the equivalent path might be used
+                to install an application from CD.
               </para>
             </listitem>
           </itemizedlist>
@@ -202,7 +210,7 @@
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
               <para>
-                Support for alternative input devices 
+                Support for alternative input devices such as graphics tablets.
               </para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
@@ -326,7 +334,8 @@
           and filesharing programs have very good open source equivalents.
           Furthermore, a sizable number of Windows programs have been
           ported to Linux directly, eliminating the need for Wine (or
-          Windows) entirely.
+          Windows) entirely.  These alternatives should be found through
+          your system's package management facilities.
         </para>
       </sect2>
       <sect2>
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