Some spelling fixes and doc update

Francois Gouget fgouget at free.fr
Wed Oct 8 08:24:02 CDT 2003


Changelog:
 * dlls/gdi/wing.c,
   dlls/wininet/netconnection.c,
   documentation/documentation.sgml

   Some spelling fixes.
   We also generate text format documentation.
   The Wine Packaging guide is intentionally in text format.


Index: dlls/gdi/wing.c
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/cvs/wine/dlls/gdi/wing.c,v
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.12 wing.c
--- dlls/gdi/wing.c	1 Oct 2003 03:20:21 -0000	1.12
+++ dlls/gdi/wing.c	1 Oct 2003 10:03:37 -0000
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@
  *
  * This initial approach could not compete with the performance of Dos games
  * (such as Doom and Warcraft) at the time, and so this dll was eventually
- * superceeded by DirectX. It should not be used by new applications, and is
- * provided only for compatability with older Windows programs.
+ * superseded by DirectX. It should not be used by new applications, and is
+ * provided only for compatibility with older Windows programs.
  */

 typedef enum WING_DITHER_TYPE
Index: dlls/wininet/netconnection.c
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/cvs/wine/dlls/wininet/netconnection.c,v
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.4 netconnection.c
--- dlls/wininet/netconnection.c	22 Sep 2003 21:15:34 -0000	1.4
+++ dlls/wininet/netconnection.c	2 Oct 2003 00:17:12 -0000
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@
 /******************************************************************************
  * NETCON_recv
  * Basically calls 'recv()' unless we should use SSL
- * number of chars receieved is put in *recvd
+ * number of chars received is put in *recvd
  */
 BOOL NETCON_recv(WININET_NETCONNECTION *connection, void *buf, size_t len, int flags,
 		int *recvd /* out */)
Index: documentation/documentation.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/cvs/wine/documentation/documentation.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.14 documentation.sgml
--- documentation/documentation.sgml	24 Sep 2003 05:11:51 -0000	1.14
+++ documentation/documentation.sgml	8 Oct 2003 12:19:33 -0000
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
     <title>Documenting Wine</title>

     <para>
-      This chapter describes how you can help improve Wines documentation.
+      This chapter describes how you can help improve Wine's documentation.
     </para>

     <para>
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       a successful experience in installing, setting up and using software. Because Wine is a
       complicated, evolving entity, providing quality up to date documentation is vital to
       encourage more people to persevere with using and contributing to the project.
-      The following sections describe in detail how to go about adding to or updating Wines
+      The following sections describe in detail how to go about adding to or updating Wine's
       existing documentation.
     </para>

@@ -60,8 +60,10 @@
           </para></listitem>

           <listItem><para>
-          The <emphasis>Wine Packagers Guide</emphasis>. This book contains information for
-          anyone who will be distributing Wine to end users in a prepackaged format.
+          The <emphasis>Wine Packager's Guide</emphasis>. This book contains
+          information for anyone who will be distributing Wine to end users
+          in a prepackaged format. It is also the exception to the rule as
+          it has intentionally been kept in text format.
           </para></listitem>

           <listItem><para>
@@ -139,7 +141,7 @@

           <listItem><para>
           Additional notes such as interaction with other parts of the system, differences
-          between Wines implementation and Win32s, errors in MSDN documentation,
+          between Wine's implementation and Win32s, errors in MSDN documentation,
           undocumented cases and bugs that Wine corrects or is compatible with.
           </para></listitem>

@@ -571,7 +573,7 @@
       </para>

       <para>
-        An easier way is to use Wines build system. To create man pages for a given
+        An easier way is to use Wine's build system. To create man pages for a given
         dll, just type <command>make man</command> from within the dlls directory
         or type <command>make manpages</command> in the root directory of the Wine
         source tree. You can then check that a man page was generated for your function,
@@ -621,8 +623,8 @@
               <para>
                The simple answer to that is that SGML allows you
                to create multiple formats of a given document from a single
-	       source. Currently it is used to create HTML, PDF and PS
-	       (PostScript) versions of the Wine books.
+	       source. Currently it is used to create HTML, PDF, PS
+	       (PostScript) and Text versions of the Wine books.
               </para>
             </note>

@@ -746,7 +748,7 @@
         <sect4>
           <title>SGML on Debian</title>
           <para>
-           This is not a definitive listing yet, but it seems
+           This is not a definitive list yet, but it seems
 	   you might need the following packages:
             <itemizedlist>
               <listitem>
@@ -927,8 +929,8 @@
             example, it doesn't make sense to put a <sgmltag
             class="starttag">book</sgmltag> element inside a <sgmltag
             class="starttag">para</sgmltag> paragraph element -- only
-            the reverse.
+            the reverse makes sense.
           </para>
           <para>
             The DTD thus defines the legal structure of the document.



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Francois Gouget         fgouget at free.fr        http://fgouget.free.fr/
                  Hiroshima '45 - Czernobyl '86 - Windows '95




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