[AppDB] Language fixes for appsubmit.php
"Alexander N. Sørnes"
alex at thehandofagony.com
Sun Apr 30 08:16:24 CDT 2006
Some language improvements. Also make the use of language more consistent.
Regards,
Alexander N. Sørnes
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Index: appsubmit.php
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RCS file: /home/wine/appdb/appsubmit.php,v
retrieving revision 1.38
diff -u -p -r1.38 appsubmit.php
--- appsubmit.php 23 Jan 2006 02:10:31 -0000 1.38
+++ appsubmit.php 30 Apr 2006 13:05:52 -0000
@@ -22,39 +22,38 @@ function newSubmition($errors)
{
// show add to queue form
echo '<form name="newApp" action="appsubmit.php" method="post">'."\n";
- echo "<p>This page is for submitting new applications to be added to this\n";
- echo "database. The application will be reviewed by the AppDB Administrator\n";
- echo "and you will be notified via email if this application will be added to\n";
- echo "the database.</p>\n";
- echo "<p><h2>Before continuing please check that you have:</h2>\n";
+ echo "<p>This page is for submitting new applications to be added to the\n";
+ echo "database. The application will be reviewed by an AppDB Administrator,\n";
+ echo "and you will be notified via e-mail if it is added to the database or rejected.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p><h2>Before continuing, please ensure that you have</h2>\n";
echo "<ul>\n";
if ($_REQUEST['apptype'] == 1)
{
- echo " <li>Searched for this application in the database. Duplicate submissions will be rejected.</li>\n";
+ echo " <li>Searched for this application in the database. Duplicate submissions will be rejected</li>\n";
echo " <li>Really want to submit an application instead of a new version of an application\n";
- echo " that is already in the database. If this is the case browse to the application\n";
- echo " and click on 'Submit new version'</li>\n";
+ echo " that is already in the database. If this is the case, browse to the application\n";
+ echo " and click on ‘Submit new version’</li>\n";
}
echo " <li>Entered a valid version for this application. This is the application\n";
- echo " version, NOT the wine version(which goes in the testing results section of the template)</li>\n";
+ echo " version, NOT the Wine version (which goes in the testing results section of the template)</li>\n";
echo " <li>Tested this application under Wine. There are tens of thousands of applications\n";
- echo " for windows, we don't need placeholder entries in the database. Please enter as complete \n";
+ echo " for Windows, we do not need placeholder entries in the database. Please enter as complete \n";
echo " as possible testing results in the version template provided below</li>\n";
echo "</ul></p>";
- echo "<p>Please don't forget to mention which Wine version you used, how well it worked\n";
- echo "and if any workaround were needed. Having app descriptions just sponsoring the app\n";
- echo "(Yes, some vendors want to use the appdb for this) or saying \"I haven't tried this app with Wine\" ";
- echo "won't help Wine development or Wine users.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p>Please do not forget to mention which Wine version you used, how well it worked\n";
+ echo "and if any workarounds were needed. Having app descriptions just sponsoring the app\n";
+ echo "(yes, some vendors want to use the appdb for this) or saying ‘I haven’t tried this app with Wine’ ";
+ echo "will not help Wine development or Wine users.</p>\n";
echo "<b><span style=\"color:red\">Please only submit applications/versions that you have tested.\n";
echo "Submissions without testing information or not using the provided template will be rejected.\n";
- echo "If you can't see the in-browser editors below please try Firefox, Mozilla or Opera browsers.\n</span></b>";
- echo "<p>After your application has been added you'll be able to submit screenshots for it, post";
+ echo "If you are unable to see the in-browser editors below, please try Firefox, Mozilla or Opera browsers.\n</span></b>";
+ echo "<p>After your application has been added, you will be able to submit screenshots for it, post";
echo " messages in its forums or become a maintainer to help others trying to run the application.</p>";
}
//deny access if not logged on
if(!$_SESSION['current']->isLoggedIn())
{
- errorpage("Insufficient privilages to create application. Are you sure you are logged in");
+ errorpage("Insufficient privilages to create application. Are you sure you are logged in?");
exit;
}
@@ -258,7 +257,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
echo "<p>This is the full view of the rejected application. \n";
echo "You need to pick a category before submitting \n";
echo "it into the database.\n";
- echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An email will automatically be sent to the\n";
+ echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An e-mail will automatically be sent to the\n";
echo "submitter to let them know the item was deleted.</p>\n\n";
echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
} else
@@ -313,7 +312,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
echo "<p>This is the full view of the application version that has been Rejected. \n";
echo "<b>App Version</b> This type of application will be nested under the selected application parent.\n";
- echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue an email will automatically be sent to the\n";
+ echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An e-mail will automatically be sent to the\n";
echo "submitter to let him know the item was deleted.</p>\n\n";
echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
} else
@@ -403,7 +402,7 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def
{
//help
echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
- echo "<p>This is the list of applications waiting for re-submition, or to be deleted.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p>This is the list of applications waiting for re-submission, or to be deleted.</p>\n";
echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and\n";
echo "re-submit it into the AppDB .<br>\n";
echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
@@ -426,10 +425,10 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def
{
//help
echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
- echo "<p>This is the list of versions waiting for re-submition or deletion.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p>This is the list of versions waiting for re-submission or deletion.</p>\n";
echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and re-submit it into \n";
echo "the AppDB .<br>\n";
- echo "<p>Note that versions linked to application that have not been yet approved are not displayed in this list.</p>\n";
+ echo "<p>Note that versions linked to application that have not been approved yet are not displayed in this list.</p>\n";
echo "the AppDB.<br>\n";
echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
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